Charlie Brown

WHAT: We are writing about a character of our choice 

SO WHAT: 

Be kind: I really like the way you highlighted the words you weren't completely clear of nice using capital letters, full stops and exclamation marks .

Be specific: A way to find out the word  "surprisingly" you could find a dictionary but there are others.

Be helpful: Try to add as much vocabulary as you can and add as much as you did in the first piece.

NOW WHAT: I need to work on putting more vocabulary in.